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John
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« on: Jun 05, 2011, 07:36:57 PM »

I don't always do this on those rare occasions when I get around to updating but 1) I like this piece pretty well and 2) this is my favorite album of the year so far.

http://www.lastplanetojakarta.com/2011/06/to_the_mourners.html
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fishjim
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« Reply #1 on: Jun 08, 2011, 12:36:49 AM »

I like this piece pretty well, too. In fact, I think it just KO'd your 30th short poem about Drastus.

High hawk season - you're not fucking kidding.
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fishjim
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« Reply #2 on: Jun 08, 2011, 07:16:51 PM »

Couple bits of ephemera on high hawks:

1.

"High Hawk Season"
Tracked to slo-mo footage of a football goal, looped. 
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=iO7K-o2py-Y


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2.

THE CAGED EAGLE'S DEATH DREAM

[an excerpt from "Cawdor" by Robinson Jeffers]
(chapter XV, paragraphs 5 – 11)


While George went to the house
For his revolver, Michal climbed up the hill
Weeping; but when he came with death in his hand
She'd not go away, but watched. At the one shot
The great dark bird leaped at the roof of the cage
In silence and struck the wood; it fell, then suddenly
Looked small and soft, muffled in its folded wings.


The nerves of men after they die dream dimly
And dwindle into their peace; they are not very passionate,
And what they had was mostly spent when they lived.
They are sieves for leaking desire; they have many pleasures
And conversations; their dreams too are like that.
The unsocial birds are a greater race;
Cold-eyed, and their blood burns. What leaped up to death,
The extension of one storm-dark wing filling its world,
Was more than the soft garment that fell. Something had flown away. Oh cage-hoarded desire,
Like the blade of a breaking wave reaped by the wind, or flame rising from fire, or cloud-coiled lightning
Suddenly unfurled in the cave of heaven: I that am stationed, and cold at heart, incapable of burning,
My blood like standing sea-water lapped in a stone pool, my desire to the rock, how can I speak of you?
Mine will go down to the deep rock.

This rose,
Possessing the air over its emptied prison,
The eager powers at its shoulders waving shadowless
Unwound the ever-widened spirals of flight
As a star light, it spins the night-stabbing threads
From its own strength and substance: so the aquiline desire
Burned itself into meteor freedom and spired
Higher still, and saw the mountain-dividing
Canyon of its captivity (that was to Cawdor
Almost his world) like an old crack in a wall,
Violet-shadowed and gold-lighted; the little stain
Spilt on the floor of the crack was the strong forest;
The grain of sand was the Rock. A speck, an atomic
Center of power clouded in its own smoke
Ran and cried in the crack; it was Cawdor; the other
Points of humanity had neither weight nor shining
To prick the eyes of even an eagle's passion.


This burned and soared. The shining ocean below lay on the shore
Like the great shield of the moon come down, rolling bright rim to rim with the earth. Against it the multiform
And many-canyoned coast-range hills were gathered into one carven mountain, one modulated
Eagle's cry made stone, stopping the strength of the sea. The beaked and winged effluence
Felt the air foam under its throat and saw
The mountain sun-cup Tassajara, where fawns
Dance in the steam of the hot fountains at dawn,
Smoothed out, and the high strained ridges beyond Cachagua,
Where the rivers are born and the last condor is dead,
Flatten, and a hundred miles toward morning the Sierras
Dawn with their peaks of snow, and dwindle and smooth down
On the globed earth


It saw from the height and desert space of unbreathable air
Where meteors make green fire and die, the ocean dropped westward to the girdle of the pearls of dawn
And the hinder edge of the night sliding towards Asia; it saw far under eastward the April-delighted
Continent; and time relaxing from it now abstracted from being, it saw the eagles destroyed,
Mean generations of gulls and crows taking their world: turn for turn in the air, as on earth
The white faces drove out the brown. It saw the white decayed and the brown from Asia returning;
It saw men learn to outfly the hawk’s brood and forget it again; it saw men cover the earth and again
Devour each other and hide in caverns, be scarce as wolves. It neither wondered nor cared, and it saw
Growth and decay alternate forever and the tides returning.


It saw, according to the sight of its kind, the archetype
Body of life a beaked carnivorous desire
Self-upheld on storm broad wings: but the eyes
Were spouts of blood; the eyes were gashed out, dark blood
Ran from the ruinous eye-pits to the hook of the beak
And rained on the waste spaces of empty heaven.
Yet the great life continued; yet the great life
Was beautiful, and she drank her defeat, and devoured
Her famine for food.


There the eagle’s phantom perceived
Its prison and its wound were not its particular wretchedness,
All that lives was maimed and bleeding, caged or in blindness,
Lopped at the ends with death and conception, and shrewd
Cautery of pain on the stumps to stifle the blood, but not
Refrains for all that; life was more than its functions
And accidents, more important then its pains and pleasures,
A torch to burn in with pride, a necessary
Ecstasy in the run of the cold substance,
And scape-goat of the greater world. (But as for me,
I have heard the summer dust crying to be born
As much as ever flesh cried out to be quiet.)
Pouring itself on fulfillment the eagles passion
Left life behind and flew at the sun its father
The great unreal talons took peace for prey
Exultantly, their death beyond death; stooped upward, and struck
Peace like a white fawn in a dell of fire.


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Greg Nog
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« Reply #3 on: Jun 08, 2011, 08:09:47 PM »

A corpse rising, angry, demanding -- this would be the furthest thing from a bad funeral I could imagine.
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Slime
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« Reply #4 on: Aug 29, 2011, 07:40:39 PM »

The album rules.  I really had no idea who they were until I saw them at Maryland Deathfest.  At first I was like "Who is this skinny dude wearing a fox hide?",but quickly they rocked the sense into me.  I bought their debut recently and it is pretty much just as good.  But i think they tapped magic with the most this year's album.
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Ashley
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« Reply #5 on: Oct 22, 2011, 12:34:41 AM »

i go back and read this a lot. 

like a lot.
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dogg you ain't gotta rustle outside in cloaks of darkness and shit
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« Reply #6 on: Oct 22, 2011, 01:21:52 PM »

great piece, great record
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